Monthly Archives: October 2014

Pacthesis Retrospective

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If you haven’t heard of Pacthesis, allow me to enlighten you. She has a account on Deviantart.com. She can be found here. She creates art and video games. Her video games are mostly Sim dates. They are also really good.

In this part, I will talk about her sim dates:

  •  Anime Date series.

 

anime

 

I’m grouping these three together because they’re very similar. An Interesting thing to note is that Anime Sim Dat 1.0 is the only game in Pacthesis’s sim date series in which you play a guy trying to form a relationship with a girl. In the other games it’s the opposite.

Looking back, they aren’t the best of the series, but they’re not bad. The writing’s kinda stiff, and it’s well, sorta dull. The art is obviously done in Flash.

However, in these three games alone you can see improvement. In 2.5, the boys start to have more of a personalty, and there are more endings.

  •  Festival Days
Used my computer to take a screenshot
Used my computer to take a screenshot

This game has many firsts. It was the first game to be titled “Something Days”, which became the standard theme of the names from this sim date on.

Secondly, It was the first game that truly had a story. While Anime Sim Date 2.5 took strides to do this, Festival Days has multiple story lines. Other characters are introduced, and it wasn’t just about trying to get into a relationship.

Finally, the art is much improved. It’s clearly still one of her earlier works, but it’s visually appealing.

  • Wonderland Days
Pacthesis. Wonderland Days Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. June 1, 2013. Web. 30 Oct 2014.
Pacthesis. Wonderland Days Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.

Ah, Wonderland Days. This was the first game of Pacthesis’ that I played. I have fond memories of this game. This is still one of my favorite games created by her.

This game is perfect for a new player. It’s the first game that has different dialogue for your choices, instead of having everyone say the same dialogue for when you say the right thing or not. The art is wonderful. There is proper shading, and everything looks more professional.

I also love the music used, even though it’s stock music.

Pacthesis also photoshopped the image below. I’d totally buy these if they were real.

Wonderland Days figures. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.
Pacthesis. Wonderland Days figures. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.
  • Idol Days
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Pacthesis. Idol Days Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.

This one I do like, but it’s not one of my favorites. The characters are nice. The music theme works. It plays pretty similar to Wonderland Days, but you have to also work on your music playing.

One thing I liked was how the main character had a lot of personality. In the previous games, the main character was a little bland. In this game, however, she expresses a lot of her personality.

I also liked how this game lacks a true bad ending. There are good endings, mind you, but just because you somehow don’t hook up with one of the boys doesn’t mean you fail at the game.

  • Kingdom Days
Pacthesis. Kingdom Days Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.
Pacthesis. Kingdom Days Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.

I’ll be frank. Kingdom Days is my least favorite of the series. It’s not bad. I’ve grown to like the game more with time.

This being my least favorite game might be the bad first experience I had with it. When I first played the game, I felt confused. One example was the magic system. It was clunky, and poorly made. I also felt that the story was a bit, confusing. I could clearly tell she was experimenting with the format, but some of the ideas don’t work.

To be fair, the characters are nice, but the only one who stood out for me was Ferris.

  • Chrono Days
Pacthesis. Chrono Days Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.
Pacthesis. Chrono Days Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.

For a long time, this was my favorite. It’s not anymore, but it’s still held in high regard.

This is where Pacthesis really hits her stride. Every character is written well. For the first time, cutscenes are played, which is a treat. It’s also cool to see the main character on screen during gameplay, instead of rare occasions. This is also the first game in which there is a female love interest. It’s really cool.

If I have one complaint, it’s the endings. In this game, if you don’t get enough relationship with someone, you get no ending. You’re just told to play the game again and do better. It feels kinda cheap not to have a bad ending.

  • Lunar Days

 

Pacthesis. Lunar Days Sim Date Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.
Pacthesis. Lunar Days Sim Date Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.

This feels like what Kingdom Days should have been. For the first time, the stories are intertwined. Instead of briefly cameoing  in other story lines, several characters stories are intertwined.

The setting and story are all fascinating. It’s one of the more complex ones, though it does have this scene….

DOWN THE HATCH! Taken while I was playing the game.
DOWN THE HATCH!
Taken while I was playing the game.

The characters are really well written, and I ended up playing the game multiple times to see what each path had to offer.

  • Memory Days
Pacthesis. Memory Days Sim Date Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.
Pacthesis. Memory Days Sim Date Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.

This game is unique. It’s a remake of the Anime Sim Dates. It surpasses them easily. The art is beautiful, the characters are fantastic, and the game is very nice.

It definitely expands on the originals. There is much more chemistry between the characters. It also helps that the main character is much more well developed than in the original.

The game is also formatted very nice, taking place over the course of a school year

  • Number Days
Pacthesis. Number Days Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.
Pacthesis. Number Days Promo Poster. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.

This, without a doubt, is now my favorite of her games. The charters are perfect, the story is written wonderfully, and I just love it.

Everyone has a place in the story. My favorite ending in the game features every character, and no romance whatsoever!

I also love the chibi look used for most of the game. Yes, some parts use the traditional style, but it mostly looks like this:

(This actually happens in the game) Pacthesis. Oh shiiiiiiiii. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.
(This actually happens in the game)
Pacthesis. Oh shiiiiiiiii. Digital Image. Deviantart. Deviantart. Web. 30 Oct 2014.

And It is glorious.

As you can see. I love these games. Unfortunately, Pacthesis is currently on hiatus. Let’s not forget the wonderful games she made, however!

 

Creating my RWBY Campaign Character

 

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I really love the web show RWBY. It has lovable characters, amazing action, and a ton of world building. I also love how the series is clearly inspired by anime.

Oum, Monty. Official logo for RWBY. Digital Image. Wikipedia. Wikipedia. June 1, 2013. Web. 29 Oct 2014.
Oum, Monty. Official logo for RWBY. Digital Image. Wikipedia. Wikipedia. June 1, 2013. Web. 29 Oct 2014.

At college,  I found that a group of people were planning to use the setting of the show for a role-playing campaign. They were using the Big Eyes, Small Mouth engine. It’s an anime-inspired role plaint game engine, which felt appropriate for RWBY. I was interested in joining in.

So began the task of creating a character. One of the first things I decided was that I wanted my character to be a human and not a Faunus. In the series of RWBY, Faunus are a humanoid race with animal features. A lot of the other people in the campaign were making Faunus, and I wanted something a little different.

I first decided to create a visual image. I didn’t think my drawing skills were good enough to fully create a character. I didn’t want to use another person’s creation, however. I wanted to make it my own.

Then I remembered that I loved virtual dress up games. I mostly used this website. I started playing one, and decided to use it for my character. I used my computer to take a screenshot.

The prototype of my character
The prototype of my character. It served as the basis for all other pictures of her.

I liked what I had created, so I decided to do more.

Elaine Elaine Vyce pocket monsters Elaine Vyce at home

Admittedly, I might have gone overboard. And that’s not even all of them!

Anyway, I had to come up with a name. I came up with many names. I eventually settled down on one, Elaine Vyce. There were reasons for choosing this name. Elaine was from Arthurian legend, and it means bright.

You might remember me mentioning the surname, Vyce, in a previous post. It comes from the villain of AT4W. I decided to use it as a surname in a sense of irony, because Elaine means bright and because my character was kind, upbeat, and heroic. It provided a nice contrast.

But the character creation process was not over yet. I still had to create my weapon and my skills. In the world of RWBY, weapons are often two other weapons meshed together. For example, the main character, Ruby, has a weapon that is both a scythe and a gun.

I decided to make my weapon both creative and unique. My character’s weapon ended up being cards; cards which were which were razor sharp, and had explosives laced onto them. I also gave my character the ability of telekinesis so that the cards can be formed into a whip.

It’s a bit strange.

My character’s skills are mostly based around that. She can throw well, she is agile, etc.

Everyone in the group had to go through a character test. We were sent through a tutorial battle. When I did mine, I did fairly well. My character wasn’t either overpowered or weak. I also discovered I could role-play well.

The group also decided to have musical themes for our characters. I gathered all of the song I thought would make a good theme for Elaine. I had 27. The others helped me whittle them down to a more manageable five. Though to be fair, I still haven’t fully decided on which theme to use. One of them can be listened to below.

Radio Martini Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)

So there you have it. My first time creating a character for a roleplaying campaign. I had a lot of fun with this, and  I want to make more characters like this.

Oh! I just had a thought.

Maybe I should cosplay her!

Elaine photo

What is me meme

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On Deviantart.com, there are several memes. These are used to express oneself. I decided to use a meme myself. I did this one a while ago, but it still represents me well.

The original template is located here.

What_Is_Katherine

Now let me expand on the points:

Who I look like: I look a lot like Haruhi Fujioka (Ouran High School Host Club), minus the glasses. It was hard finding characters who look like me, but Haruhi felt right. The hair’s a bit too short, however.

Who I act like: I feel like my personality is a stew of four different characters. These are Haruhi Suzumiya (The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya), Italy (Hetalia), Pinkie Pie, and Twilight Sparkle (Both from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic). Like Italy and Pinkie Pie, I am very excitable, eager, and somewhat childish. Like Twilight, I’m studious and try to do a lot of things by the book. Finally, like Haruhi, I am a bit stubborn.

Who I want to be: I love the Sailor Guardians (Sailor Moon). They’re strong and powerful, but they aren’t perfect. They all make mistakes, and they learn from them.  How many female heroes are like that? Also, they’re all different. They all have unique quirks.None of them are cookie cutter stereotypes. They all are into different things. Not all of them are into fashion or boys. Some of them are athletic. Heck, one of them, introduced in a later season, is a racecar driver!  Finally, they prove that being girly doesn’t equal being weak. They do talk about stereotypical girls stuff at time, but that doesn’t mean that they can’t kick ass. They always defeat the villains, and it is glorious.

What my style resembles: I couldn’t really find anything that matched my style, so I decided to use my own art for this one. As you can see, a lot of my art is anime based. I like my art, though it’s clearly not as good as other pieces of art on this meme.

What styles inspire me: Yeah, it’s kinda a mess on the meme. I’m inspired by a lot of art styles. There are a lot of different anime styles on the meme. The anime pictured are Space Battleship Yamato (My personal favorite anime ever), Sailor Moon (again), Spirited Away, and Cowboy Bebop. I also used art from a video game, Kingdom Hearts. I also like the Disney/Pixar art style as well. I used The Incredibles not only because it was a pixar movie, but because of the 60s inspired art. These art styles are merely the tip of the iceberg, as there are numerous other art styles that Inspire me.

What styles I avoid: I don’t necessarily hate these styles but they aren’t my cup of tea. The media shown here are Regular Show, Mars Need Moms, and Dragon Ball Z. I don’t really care for the  art styles of a lot of current western cartoons, like Regular Show. It’s not bad, it’s just a bit too simple for me. The more muscular, angular, and sharp look of shows like Dragon Ball Z doesn’t really interest me. Finally I don’t really care for hyper-realistic animation, especially when done badly, like in Mars Needs Moms. Then, it’s runs straight into the Uncanny Valley, and it’s really creepy.

My reaction to Atop The Fourth Wall: The Trial of Peter Parker

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I would consider myself a new fan of Atop the Fourth Wall (AT4W). It follows a man named Linkara who reviews comic books, and has various adventures.

I got into the series earlier this year. It’s amazing. One of my favorite things about the series is the ongoing storyline. In fact, I often fight the urge to skip the review and go straight to the storyline part.

Being a relatively new fan, I haven’t had the pleasure of seeing a story arc unfold in real time. With older story arcs, I can just breeze through them. I haven’t been wondering about what’s going to happen next, as I can just play the next episode.

However, which this story arc, I’ve been able to wonder what’s going to happen on the next episode. I do wonder what’s going to happen. I don’t know what to expect. In fact, I’m surprised.

Today, the newest episode of AT4W came out. It concluded the current story arc, The Machinations of Worms. It’s villain was the King of Worms, who, in a nutshell, is really terrifying!

The episode itself was really good, and here is my reaction to it.

Previously on AT4W, Linkara was kidnapped by the King of Worms and taken to the Court of Worms. Now the King plans to dissect Linkara’s soul to find out his secret.

Let’s begin! Also, All screenshots taken by me.

****Spoiler Warning!*****

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The older bodies of Polio came to save Linkara! Awesome! This episode’s off to a great start!

Okay. Linkara’s waiting for the King to be ready to kill him. What does he do to pass the time before his doom?

Read a comic book.

Typical.

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Hang on, SIXTH anniversary?! Congratulations Linkara!  Though you bring up a good point. How ARE you showing this in the Court of Worms?

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I really love the title card this week. I’m a sucker for Ace Attorney references. That, and it looks amazing. Then again, all the title cards are amazing.

Oh god the comic he reviewed this time sucks! How can something be called The Trial of Peter Parker, and only have ten or so pages about the actual trial itself?!?

I actually felt bored. Not because of Linkara, he was really funny and amazing. A standout moment is when he criticized when Mary-Jane, who at the time was Peter Parker’s wife, was called to testify, and explaining why that would not work in the real world. He clearly did more research than the people writing the comic.

I was bored because of the comic itself. It’s pointless, has unlikeable characters, and is DUMB.

However, when the video got the the storyline part it was awesome!

 

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The King of Worms

Oh god, it was amazing, but is was really creepy!

Despite the best efforts of Linkara and his friends, The King is able to get into Linkara’s soul.

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The Plot Hole? This can’t be good…

There’s a montage of a ton of stuff. It’s not just clips from AT4W, but with crossovers Linkara’s been in.

It can’t be a good omen that the last shot is of the Plot Hole….

After that, it’s kinda hard to say. It’s set in Linkara’s living room. A lot of villains from the show’s past show up. It pretty terrifying. Im not goinng to show all of it, but…

Here's your Nightmare Fuel!
Here’s your Nightmare Fuel!

This is the least of which is going on.

After all that, the King has some kind of.. seizure, and Linkara and his friends fire on it. The King dies.

So happy ending, right?

Well…

It seems that way, but It’s later revealed that Linkara’s weapons did nothing to it. The King literally died of fright, based off what it saw in Linkara’s mind. The last scene of the episode?

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Wait, 90s Kid and Lord Vyce?  Working together? 90s Kid is one of Linkara’s allies, and Lord Vyce is one of Linkara’s biggest enemies! That’s unexpected. Pretty cool cliffhanger, though.

All in all, a very good episode. The atmosphere was appropriate. It was nice seeing old villains again. Finally, A interesting cliffhanger for the next story arc.

Keep on the good work!

Hourglass of Summer OVA review

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I love the visual novel Hourglass of Summer. It’s beautiful, has likable characters, and a very interesting story.

My personal copy, bought at Dragon Con 2012.
My personal copy, bought at Dragon Con 2012.

The story?

You play as Koutarou Makimura. It’s almost summer vacation. He’s got a hugh crush on his classmate Kaho Serizawa. During the last week of school, he decides to ask her out.  although his friends do not believe this will work. He goes to sleep that night excited about both summer and Kaho. But when he wakes up, it is the first day of the next school year.

When he arrives at the opening ceremony, he is greeted by his grief-stricken classmates, who mourn the untimely death of his girlfriend, Kaho! Of course, he is very confused. When he faints from shock, he wakes up on a day in the middle of summer. Now Kotarou must live his entire summer with each day being in a random order. He tries to figure out what is going on, and tries to determine if his unique situation can help save Kaho.

That’s the basic summery, anyway. There’s definitely a lot of potential for a good anime series there.  However, the anime would need to be at least 26 episodes long. Instead, Hourglass of Summer got a two episode OVA (Original Video Animation) with a total runtime of an hour.

Needless to say, it isn’t good.

The anime is rushed. Since it’s only two episodes of 30 minutes each, the plot isn’t really explained at all. Everything just happens, and there’s no coherency.

For example, a major character, Mana, in the game barely appears in the first episode and doesn’t appear at all in the second episode.

Game? Major character with her own storyline. Taken while I was playing the game.
Game? Major character with her own storyline. Taken while I was playing the game.

 

OVA? Nope! You're lucky to just be in one episode! Taken while I was watching the OVA.
OVA? Nope! You’re lucky to just be in one episode! Taken while I was watching the OVA.

Moving on, the art is below par. How could such a beautiful game produce such an ugly, off model OVA? The backgrounds are plain, and the characters look like fan art of the game characters.

If you think i’m just being overly dramatic, just look at this comparison.

Kaho as she appears in the original game
Kaho as she appears in the original game. Taken while I was playing the game.
Kaho as she appears in the OVA
Kaho as she appears in the OVA. Taken while I was watching the OVA.

Clearly there’s a notable difference. The game has more detail, and everything seemed better proportioned in the game. The animation is also horrendous.

Finally, the game had an art book that came with the game.

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I love this book.

The OVA? Of course not.

Last but not least, is the handling of more questionable scenes. Unlike many visual novels, Hourglass of Summer is clean. It doesn’t have sexual scenes. Hugging and kissing is a far as it gets.

This is as far as it gets. Taken while I was playing the game.
Sweet tender moments like this are the farthest the game gets. Taken while I was playing the game.

Clearly thinking this wasn’t enough, the OVA adds a ton of needless fan service to the story.

I'm going to need brain bleach. Taken while i was watching the OVA.
I’m going to need brain bleach. Taken while i was watching the OVA.

 

Bottom line? This OVA sucks. It’s too short, rush, looks terrible, and oh god the fan service! It’s no surprise that the OVA was never released outside of Japan. For this review, I watched the OVA on youtube and took screenshots on my computer.

My recommendation is to pass on the OVA and simply play the original game. If you can find the english version of the game (it’s out of print), buy it. It’s amazing! I guarantee that you’ll be more satisfied with the game than the OVA.

Some of my guilty pleasures

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As a gamer, nerd, geek, etc, of course I have come across things that I would feel guilty about, yet still enjoy. I have this theory that everything is someone’s guilty pleasure.

It’s mostly video games, but there are a few other things in here. Granted, there’s probably more of these, but here are some of my guilty pleasures:

  • 102 Dalmatians: Puppies to the Rescue (2000)

 

Odino. Disney’s 102 Dalmatians: Puppies to the Rescue. Digital Image. Gamefaqs. CBS Interactive. Web. 16 Oct 2014.

I know what your thinking about. A playstation kids game? A licensed product, clearly made to make a quick buck? I know that these sort of things don’t have the best of reputations. But this game is surprisingly good for one that’s plot includes the line “Cruella’s used her legion of robotic toys to kidnap all the pets in England!”

 

…I wish I was kidding…
…I wish I was kidding…

Anyway, the gameplay is fun and the graphics are decent. This was one of the first games I truly played as a kid. Even now, When I sometime play this game to relax.

  • Winx Club (2004-Ongoing)

 

Generic_Group01. Digital Image. Michaelsfavorites2. Powweb, Web. 17 Oct 2014

The series has become a part of my childhood. It was the Sailor Moon of my childhood. Although one could argue that the main character is a Mary Sue, some of the choices this show makes is questionable, that it’s unquestionably a series set at young girls, and with the absolutely terrible fifth season (THE MAIN VILLAIN IS POWERED BY POLLUTION?!?), I can’t help but love this series.

  • Shadow the Hedgehog (2005)
Xcarvenger. Shadow the Hedgehog. Digital Image. Gamefaqs. CBS Interactive. Web. 16 Oct 2014.

Would you believe this was my first Sonic the Hedgehog game I ever played? Yeah, not the best start. The gameplay is wonky, the dialogue can be awkward (“Where that DAMN fourth chaos emerald?”, and “Find the computer room!” come to mind), and it can be unintentionally hilarious at times.That said, I genuinely enjoy the game. In fact, I actually like the story mode! And it’s nowhere near as bad as the next sonic game:

Sonic the Hedgehog Next-Gen Box Art. Digital Image. Wikipedia. Wikipedia. 3 July 2010. Web. 17 Oct 2014.
Sonic the Hedgehog Next-Gen Box Art. Digital Image. Wikipedia. Wikipedia. 3 July 2010. Web. 17 Oct 2014.

…shiver…

  • Sister Princess (2001)
Sister Princess. Digital Image. Animenewsnetwork. Anime News Network. Web. 17 Oct 2014.

This show isn’t actually bad, but it is slow. Nothing really happens. It’s just the adventures of a guy with his 12 sisters. Even when the last couple of episodes try to have a plot, it kinda falls flat. There is also the *cough* reputation this series has. When I talk to people about this series, I have to stress that nothing like that happens in this series. However, that reputation, along with the very slow pace, scares off some people, and I can’t say I don’t understand.

But with that said, the series is so darn cute! It’s what I watch when I want to watch simple comedic fluff.

  • Barbie Mariposa (2008):
Barbie Mariposa. Digital Image. Wikipedia. Wikipedia. 14 May 2008. Web. 17 Oct 2014.

Yes, it’s Barbie. I know that you think I’ve gone mad, haven’t i? Well, this is my list of guilty pleasures.

Actually, I love a lot of the Barbie movies. I grew up with them, and there’s something about them. They are aimed at very young girls, but most of them don’t feel too childish. Are there those I don’t like? Yes. Some of them are boring, and I haven’t been interested in the more recent films. That doesn’t stop me from loving the ones I do love, though.

Mariposa is probably my favorite because of this feeling in it. It actually feels like something is at stake. I mean, how many Barbie movies have a NightmareFuel TVTropes page?

  • The Barbie Diaries: High School Mystery (2006)
Llamaman2. Shadow the Hedgehog. Digital Image. Gamefaqs. CBS Interactive. Web. 16 Oct 2014.

Yes, It’s a Barbie mystery game, and it’s actually decent! Most Barbie games are simple girls game. I assure you that I would not put the majority of these games as guilty pleasures.

But this game is a guilty pleasure because there is actually things to do. The mystery is decent. and it’s kinda open world. Also the mini-games are pretty fun.

It’s ironic. The one Barbie game I still like is the one based off the movie i could care less for.
That being said, If you play this, stay away from the GBA version. You have been warned.

And now the for biggest one:

  • Delgo (2008)
Delgo. Digital Image. Tvtropes. TV Tropes Foundation, LLC. Web. 17 Oct 2014.
Delgo. Digital Image. Tvtropes. TV Tropes Foundation, LLC. Web. 17 Oct 2014.

…I can’t defend this one.
The movie is terrible. It’s poorly written, the animation looks like a sub-par video game and could probably give young children nightmares. The plot is so cliched that I swear that the writers copy and pasted it from TVTropes. It’s no wonder that it bombed so hard in theaters.

…And yet I can’t hate it. Maybe it’s pity. Even though it’s so horrible, I can tell that there was a lot of love and effort put into the project. It doesn’t make the film good, but it does put a new light on it.

I’d also recommend this blog post from someone who actually worked on the film: http://jasonmaurer.com/2008/12/20/delgos-release/
It’s actually pretty mature. He acknowledged that the film didn’t do well at the box office (At the time it was the lowest grossing film ever made, it’s since become the second lowest grossing), and he didn’t make up excuses. Instead, he thanked people who actually supported the project, and stated he was proud to have worked on it.

So I hope you can see why I can’t hate it.

TED Video

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I watched this TED talk:

http://www.ted.com/talks/ruby_wax_what_s_so_funny_about_mental_illness

In this video, comedian Ruby Wax talks about mental illness. She explains that disabilities of the body, but mental disabilities generally don’t. Wax urges us to end the stigma.

Helping with her talk is the fact that Ruby Wax herself has a mental illness. The fact that she suffers from depression helps to illustrate her point.

The multimodal elements are presented fairly well. She made all the visual elements herself. They are actually pretty creative. She uses a clay model of the brain, cardboard cutouts, and pictures.

With invention, she clearly thought about what she was going to talk about, with her having a mental illness already. It’s clear she brainstormed what she was going to say.

Arrangement was a weak point. The beginning felt overlong, like she was stalling for time. She spent a lot of time at the start on one story about her biggest breakdown and where she got her mental illness. However, it did reflect what was happening to her. She stayed on topic.

Style was interesting. She made all her visual elements herself. It doesn’t look amazing, but you you can tell she put a lot of effort into it. It also clearly illustrates what she was talking about.

Memory was a little weak. At times, you could tell she forgot what she was going to say. This lead to a lot of pauses where she remembers what she was going to say.

Delivery was fine, barring a few memory hiccups. She brought a comedic touch to the topic, not afraid to make fun of herself. That being said, she did move around a lot. It become distracting, however.

In the end, it was an effective TED Talk. There were a few hiccups, but it was successful in illustrating what’s it’s like to live with a mental illness.